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Welcome to Urthos

Welcome to the Archives. From here, you will be able to see Chapters, Sections and Scenes from the upcoming book, Heirs of a Broken Circle. The serialization of the book is now  on Royal Road and Patreon. I will post first in the Written Work and then move entries into the Archive so that you can find them and continue the story from where you left off. Note that entries will go live first on Royal Road Patreon and that the Archives will only hold what is first shown on the website and as such, may not be complete. 

Stories from the Ashan

The First Marks


A Short Story from the Ashan: Tales of the Southern Clans


Episode 1—A Morning’s Work


The morning broke clear and bright, with the sun already promising heat before it had fully cleared the horizon. Korath woke before dawn, before the others and most importantly, before his father. He ate quickly: dried meat, fruit and a piece of flatbread with seasoned oil. The drink beside it was cool and deep red, steeped in hibiscus, honey, cinnamon. The sharp tang cut through the dryness in his mouth, leaving him alert. 


There was work to be done. He gathered what he would need with practiced care—herbs, clipped stems, small bundles he had prepared the night before and then stepped from his room into the common den of the house. Its earthen walls held the night’s cool, the air tempered against the heat already building outside. The floor beneath his feet was packed smooth from years of use. The home was a reflection of his father, and his father’s father. 


His father would already be awake. Tharuun Tharnok did not sleep past the first light, and he did not repeat instruction. What Korath carried into the day, he carried because he had earned it—or because he had failed to learn it the first time. House Tharnok had held the shaman’s charge longer than Korath had been alive. His grandfather before Tharuun. His father now, and one day—if he proved worthy—himself. Not only as shaman but leader to the clans his house served. 


The work had never been divided for him through words, but in practice it settled into three paths: the knowing of plants, the making of remedies and the work of hands and tools when knowledge alone was not enough. Today’s events would test the first. 

He had spent the past week along the Ashan fringe, walking the boundary between desert and plain, gathering what the season offered and what it tried to hide. Some of it fresh, some of it drawn from stores laid by in better months and seasons. All of it chosen with care. One of the first lessons he had learned early was that a plant mistaken at dusk could kill by morning. Tharuun had said that once and only once. Korath had not forgotten—he only hoped he understood it. 


He laid the herbs and plants and bundled cuttings upon the long table that ran the length of one wall, its dark wood already set with tools and books that he had used in study for this day. He checked that each item was in its proper place and ready, then drew a slow breath and let it out, steadying himself. The calm lasted only until he heard his father’s footsteps. Tharuun emerged from his quarters into the common den and paused, taking in his son where he stood near the worktable.

 

“Up early, my young Vark’an. That is good. Do you feel ready for the day?” 


His father’s voice was deep and gruff. 


Korath turned to him, gesturing lightly across the table in invitation. “I think I am nearly ready. A quick review, a last check, and then I will be as ready as I can be.”

Tharuun regarded him with a faint, questioning look.


“A quick review, eh?” He gave a low chuckle. “Better a quick review than none at all. But… as you are already there, take a full one. Center your mind and decide whether you are ready or not.” 


He moved past Korath, glancing at the table and the items upon it. Then headed toward the cooking hearth and pantry in the next room. Korath turned back to his work, studying the arrangement again, willing his thoughts to settle. From the kitchen space came the quiet sounds of Tharuun preparing breakfast—the only thing that pulled at his focus.


Korath worked through the items on the table methodically, beginning at the left and moving right. Each was lifted, turned, inspected, then set back in its place. Not searching for errors—he had already done that work the night before. This was different. Here, he fixed each item in his mind so that when the moment came, his hands would know where to find what they needed. A place for everything, and everything in its place. 


He had dried the vel’shari correctly this time. The color held, the aroma was right. He no longer trusted scent alone. The last time he had attempted the drying, he had failed, letting it dry too fast, the oils failing to bind and what was left only smelled right and did nothing. 


His father had said nothing then either, simply waiting till Korath worked it out. 

The fever bundle was sound, his compress cloths folded tight and clean. The small bone-handled blade he used for cutting, sharp. Dull blades left ragged wounds that healed poorly, if at all, and left scars. Tharuun’s hands told that story as well, in the economy of their scars.


He reached for the mortar and pestle, then paused.


The ink. It sat in its small clay vessel at the table’s far end, stoppered with wax. He had mixed it three days past under his father’s watchful eye—the base rendered from fat and resin, the mineral ground coarse and folded in until the color held its shimmer. Blue-green where the light caught it, dark where it didn’t. His first attempt had been poor at best, the mixture flat and separating. The second had held for an evening then separated overnight. The third held.


He did not open it. He set his finger briefly on the stopper and moved on. 


Breakfast smells reached him from the kitchen—flatbread warming on the stone, something sweet with dried fruit. His stomach growled with an urgency that belied the morning’s earlier snack, clearly not satisfied with that offering alone. He let it growl, working the last items on the table without fighting the distraction. Hunger was not his problem to solve at the moment, satisfaction in his preparation was. He took a step back, looked across the table and nodded. 


Tharuun’s footsteps returned.

***

Episode 2—The Elders


Tharuun set an olive wood plate at Korath’s end of the table—not the worktable, which would soon be moved to the center of the room, next to the firepit, but a smaller table near the window set for meals—and another across from it for himself. Flatbread, dried figs wrapped in a cured meat with a small jar of spiced honey, and a wedge of hard cheese. He sat, pausing a moment with his head bowed, then broke the bread, handing a piece—and a look—to his son. Korath nodded as he took the bread and sat. He gave his own quiet thanks before eating. They ate in silence, each turned inward toward the day ahead. 


Outside, the oasis was waking—the low voices of those already at work, the shifting of animals, and the steady rhythm of a people that knew to get things done before the sun rose too high.


Tharuun reached for the cheese. “Do you remember who attends today?”


“Grandfather, for one, if his leg allows it.” Tharuun nodded once, then waited. Korath listed the others, raising his fingers one by one. “Elder Soru. Elder Makaru. Elder Othar. Elder Kavaro.”


Tharuun nodded once. “Your grandfather will be there. Elder Othar may not.”


Korath looked down at his bread. He knew that Elder Othar had not missed a trial in forty years, no matter the pain it cost him.


They finished the meal. Tharuun stacked the plates while Korath returned to the worktable for one final review before it was moved. His father joined him and they each took a side, stepping carefully down into the sunken center of the den—a space held for council as well as trial. Neither spoke again until the first knock came at the door.


Elder Soru entered without waiting for an invitation. Makaru behind him, slower, deliberate, her eyes moving to the worktable before they moved to Korath. Kavaro came next, the youngest of the Elders. He glanced once to Korath, offering a small, quick grin that vanished as quickly as it came. Behind him strode Granu Tharnok, leaning on the walking staff he favored when his leg pained him. He met Korath’s eyes and said nothing.


Tharuun gestured once toward the center of the room.

 

The Elders settled on the low benches that ringed the sunken floor, their positions unhurried and practiced. The fire pit at the room’s center held the ash of the last ceremony, held in early spring, at the marking of young Drevna’s first hunt. The ash had not been cleared, waiting for the next fire.


Above them the dome rose in a smooth vault, its apex open to the sky through the narrow smoke channel that pierced the peak. In winter, the fire drew the cold upward and the warmth lingered in the earthen walls long after the flames were banked. In the deep months, the dome became a thing of sound as much as structure. Voice carried differently under it, rounder, fuller, as if the room itself was listening. 


Today the pit was unlit. Korath took his place next to the worktable.

 

***


Tharuun did not call the proceedings to order. He simply moved to his place at the edge of the sunken floor, settled himself, and looked at his son.


Korath drew a breath and began.


He named each item on the table as he touched it—not reciting, not performing for the elders, but working through the sequence the way his father had taught him. Each name carried its use, its preparation, its limits. The vel’shari for deep tissue inflammation, compress application only, never ingested. The fever bundle, slower than willow bark, but with a longer hold. The cleansing wash, simple, but the foundation of everything else. A wound poorly cleaned made all other work meaningless.


The elders listened without expression. Granu’s hands rested on his staff. Elder Soru’s eyes moved between Korath and the table with the patience of a man who had sat through many such mornings.


When Korath finished the naming, Tharuun spoke.


“Boral has a wound that needs attention.” He gestured once toward the door.


A young man entered, his shadow crossing the floor before him as he stepped inside. The sun was already high enough to press heat into the oasis beyond. He was not old, perhaps twenty-five, broad through the shoulders, a hunter’s build. Korath’s attention went immediately to the man’s arm. The wrap was stained, tied with only moderate care. 


He gestured Boral forward. “Sit.”


Boral took the seat beside the worktable and unwrapped his forearm without comment. The laceration ran along the outside of the wrist. Four, maybe five, days old by its look. The edges had begun to draw together on their own. Around the margins, the skin was warm and raised—pink, shading toward red at the wound’s center.


Korath examined it. Then he reached for his tools.


Episode 3—The Trial Begins


Korath worked cleanly at first. He irrigated the wound with the cleansing wash, applying it with the cloth kept for that purpose, working from the wound’s center outward the way Tharuun had demonstrated. His movements were gentle but purposeful, removing debris and loosening the lint that had begun to cling to the torn flesh. 


Boral sat without complaint, his eyes resting as Korath worked, the only sign of discomfort, a slight wince when the skin was pulled a little too vigorously. Korath adjusted and Boral sat with the stillness of a man accustomed to discomfort and the same patience he brought to the hunt.


The edges were closing well on their own; the debris had been superficial and not deep set. The inflammation around the margin was present but contained. Korath read it as surface work—the body doing what it was built to do, needing only support rather than a more direct intervention. He assessed that stitching would not be necessary, though the skin would likely scar, but cleanly. He shared his findings. Boral nodded. “I don’t mind scars—they tell my tale better than any words can.”


Korath paused a moment, then reached for the compress cloth and the vel’shari. He did not reach for the milder poultice. 


The decision came from confidence rather than consideration and, in hindsight, he knew that this was where his mistakes took root. He had seen wounds like this, had watched his father treat them, had read the signs the way Tharuun had taught. The vel’shari would hold longer, work deeper. Better to treat for what the wound could become than for it appeared to be.


He applied the compress and bound it with steady hands. For a moment, nothing.

Then Boral’s breath came out hard through his nose, his jaws tensed. The hand on his knee closed slowly into a fist and opened again.


Korath kept his hands still. He looked at the compress, then to Boral’s face and finally to the fist that had closed and opened. He had not asked what the wound felt like before he began. He had not asked whether Boral had a sense of how deep the cut was nor had he checked whether the heat was at the surface only. He had assumed. Boral began to relax, his breathing less tense and his body less rigid, he looked to Korath, a question in his eyes. 


Korath did not answer. The room did not move. Tharuun did not speak. And Korath understood—with a clarity that arrived too late to be useful—exactly what he had done.


***


The compress came off with the same steady hands that put it on. Korath didn’t rush—rushing now would only further compound the error with panic and panic was the one thing he could not afford. Not before the Elders. Not before his grandfather. And not before his father, who had not yet moved and sat stone-faced, his silence enough to press against the walls of the room.


“I applied the wrong preparation,” Korath said. He said it to the room, not to Boral, not to Tharuun. “The vel’shari was too aggressive for a surface inflammation. I read the wound wrong because I did not ask the questions that I should have.”


Boral flexed his wrist carefully, the skin around the wound’s margin already deepening in color, angrier than it had been. Not damaged beyond correction, but worse for the care the man had received. Korath turned to Boral and this time asked, “May I clean it and apply the better treatment for it?” Boral nodded and Korath reached for the cleansing wash, cleaning the residual left by the vel’shari compress and allowed it to dry.


Korath watched as the wound dried in the desert air and asked the first of the questions he should have started with. “How did this happen?” Boral looked down, a bit embarrassed. “I took a bit of tumble down the embankment while tracking a bighorn. My arm got caught on an outcropping and, well, here I am.”


Korath nodded, catching Boral’s eye. “How quickly were you able to wash it?”


Boral chuckled, “My luck was good, the stream at the bottom of the embankment was clean and clear. My uncle wrapped it later that day when I returned home—no bighorn and only this for my troubles.”


Korath re-examined the wound and noted it had fully dried. “I am going to apply a milder poultice,” he said. “It will support the healing without the sting from before.”


A brief pause.


“My apologies on that.”


Boral laughed softly. “Korath, it’s my own doing and a lesson learned that I won’t soon forget, but by the spirits, I think that vel’shari hurt worse than the cut that brought it.” 

Korath grimaced, but then smiled. “This will feel much better,” as he applied the second compress and bound it. Boral’s hands stayed open on his knees this time.


When it was done Korath stepped back. He did not look at his father. He looked at Elder Soru, then at Makaru and Kavaro and then his grandfather, whose hands had not moved from his staff and whose expression had not changed. It was his gaze, of all of them, that Korath found hardest to meet. Granu held his gaze for a moment longer. Then nodded, once, barely visible.


Not approval and not absolution but an understanding of what experience, more than words, teaches.


***


Tharuun stood and motioned Boral to the door, clapping him lightly on the shoulder and clasping his hand as he passed. When the door closed, Tharuun remained where he was for a moment, taking in Korath, the room, the elders—each held in their own thoughts. He looked at his son a moment longer.


“We will convene in private,” he said. “You will be called when judgment is made.” 


Korath bowed his head, turned, and left without a word, closing the door quietly behind him. 


Tharuun waited until it was fully shut. Then he turned back to the chamber. 


“He failed,” he said. “There is no question on that.” 


He did not sit. Soru spoke first. 


“There is no question,” he agreed. “And yet, there is question as to what was learned through the failure.”


Korath’s grandfather coughed softly, shifting his weight as he sat. “In my years,” he said, “I have learned more from failure than from any success.” His gaze moved across the room. “The lad failed in his first assessment. He assumed, where questions would have served him better.” 


He glanced at the faces around the room. “But he did not fail in the correction.” He settled back, hands resting once more on the staff.


Makaru rose. 


“He is young,” she said. Her gaze settled on Tharuun, then moved briefly to Granu. 


“You have both served long—as shaman and as leaders.” Her voice remained even. “My concern is not the poultice. It is the assumption. That is where danger lies—not in the hand, but in the judgment behind it.” 


She held Tharuun’s gaze. 


“He is your Vark’an, Tharuun, and I know that he is yet learning. I have known you long, my friend—you do not act on assumption. That is my concern for today.”

Kavaro stood more slowly. 


“I am newer to this seat than the rest of you,” he said, glancing once around the circle.

“But I have seen enough to know what matters.”


He inclined his head toward Makaru. 


“This trial is not only of knowledge—it is of judgment. Of leadership.”


He looked to Tharuun. 


“He assumed. Yes.” A brief pause. “But he corrected. And he named the failure to himself.” He straightened. “That matters. My vote is that he continue as Vark’an—and that, under Tharuun’s guidance, he will grow into both roles.” 


He looked to Granu. “I call the question.”


Granu pushed himself to his feet with a low groan, leaning into his staff. 


“The question has been called,” he said. “Do we allow young Korath to continue his studies and take his first marks?” He waited.


Kavaro spoke first. “Aye.”


Soru followed. “Aye.”


Makaru rose again, slower this time, addressing Tharuun directly. “Long have I known you, I have said my concern. I trust in you,” she said. “Both for your leadership, your knowledge and that you will make the call that best serves our people.” Her gaze held steady. “My vote stands with yours. Cast it well.” She sat back down.


Granu looked quietly at Tharuun, his expression betraying no emotion, only a quietude and patience, waiting to hear Tharuun’s stand.


Tharuun looked once around the room, at the table and the work that had been done there today. Then he spoke. 


“Were he not my son, my vote would be aye,” he paused. “That he is my son, know that my expectations are higher.” His voice did not rise. “I am disappointed in the failure and more at the assumption that was made leading to it.” Another pause. “But he is yet young and early in his path as Vark’an.” He looked to his father. “He shows promise.” 


“My vote is aye.”


Granu stood still for a moment, then gave a slow nod. 


“You have your work cut out for you, my son,” he said. “And you will not do that work alone.” His gaze shifted. “The lad must be given time—and guidance—to learn from failure.” A breath. “For the sake of our people and those who depend on us.” He tapped his staff once. 


“Aye. He advances.” He turned toward the door. “The marks will be made at dusk. At cave’s entrance.” A pause. “You will inform him.”


As he passed, he placed a hand on Tharuun’s shoulder and gave a single nod.


The others rose in turn, each clasping Tharuun’s hand before leaving. 

When the last had gone, the door closed behind them. Tharuun remained where he stood. Then, at last, he looked to the worktable. He let out a slow breath. 


His work was, indeed, cut out for him.


***


Episode 4—The Trial Ends


Korath sat outside.


Not far—the low bench beside the door, in the narrow band of shade the roof’s overhang cast against the wall. The sun had climbed while he waited and the oasis beyond the house moved in its midday rhythm, unhurried, indifferent to what was being decided inside. 


He had replayed it twice. Then he had stopped.


There was nothing in the replay that he did not already know. He had assumed. The assumption had cost Boral pain and the clan a portion of its stores, small but not nothing. He had corrected, he had named it. And none of that changed what the first reach of his hand had been. Or why. 


A child laughed near the water’s edge. A woman’s voice answered it, low and easy. Palm fronds shifted in what passed for a breeze at this hour. The door opened.


Tharuun stepped out, letting it close behind him. He did not look at Korath at first. He stood for a moment facing the oasis, deep in thought. Then he turned. “You advance,” he said. “The marks will be made at dusk. At the cave’s entrance.” A pause the length of a breath. “You will make ready.”


He held Korath’s gaze for a moment. Then he moved past him, back toward the door. His hand came down briefly on Korath’s shoulder as he passed—a single, reassuring pressure, there and gone. The door closed.


Korath sat for a moment longer in the narrowing shade. Then he rose, straightened, and turned toward the oasis.


There was still work to be done.


***


Korath made his preparations in silence. The sun had begun its slow descent when he gathered what he would need—the tools laid out again, not as they had been for the trial, but as they were meant to be used. The mortar and pestle. The cloths. The bone-handled blade.


And the ink.


He took the small clay vessel in both hands, feeling the weight of it, the subtle shift of what lay within. The wax seal held. He turned it once, watching the way the light caught at the faint residue along its lip. The third mixture had held. He set it carefully into his satchel and closed it.


The path to the cave rose along the outer edge of the oasis, where the packed earth gave way to stone. Korath walked it as he had many times before, though never with this purpose. The light softened as he climbed. The air shifted—cooler, touched by the waters of the oasis, the petrichor, ancient and refreshing, smelling of earth and clean stone. Voices carried ahead of him, low and measured. The Elders were already gathered and with them many of the clan of House Tharnok. 


The amphitheater at the cave’s entrance had been shaped more by time than by tool—a shallow bowl of stone facing the fading light. The clan had smoothed it over the many years, setting low benches along the curve but the place remained more found than made.


Granu stood near the center, his staff set before him. Soru and Makaru sat along the stone arc, Kavaro stood just behind them, attentive, though less settled than the others. Tharuun stood apart.


He did not look to Korath as he approached. 


Korath stepped into the space and stopped where the ground dipped toward the center. He set his satchel down, then waited. No one spoke. The wind moved through the rocks above, carrying with it the dry scent of the plains beyond. Granu lifted his head.


“You understand why you are here.” It was not a question. 


Korath inclined his head. “I do.”


Granu studied him a moment longer, then nodded once.


“Then we proceed.”


Episode 5—The Marks of Vark’an


Korath knelt and opened his satchel. He set each tool out with care, placing them in order—not as rehearsal, but as use. This time, nothing was certain. He took the clay vessel and cracked the wax seal, unwrapping it from the top. 


The scent rose immediately—rendered tallow, resin, and mineral. He opened it fully and turned it slightly in the light. The ink caught what remained of the sun—blue-green at the edges, dark where it settled deeper. A quiet murmur passed among the clanspeople. Granu stepped closer. 


“You prepared this.”


“I did.”


Granu held out his hand and Korath passed him the vessel. The Elder turned it, studying the mixture, watching how the light moved across its surface. Then he returned it.


“It holds.”


Makaru rose. She looked evenly at Korath.


“You know what this mark is.”


Korath looked to his forearm—the inner skin unmarked, waiting.


“I do.”


“And what it signifies?”


Korath drew a breath. “It marks the boundary of what I know,” he said. “And the cost of stepping beyond it without cause.”


Silence followed. Measured. Makaru nodded once and sat.


Granu turned. “Your arm.”


Korath extended it, palm upward, the inner forearm exposed. Granu nodded. Then he looked to Tharuun.


For the first time since Korath had arrived, Tharuun moved. He stepped forward and knelt opposite his son, the tools between them. He did not speak and Korath did not look at him. He kept his gaze forward. Tharuun took up the blade, testing its edge once against the pad of his thumb. Sharp. He dipped it into the ink, the blue-green liquid coated the steel in a thick, oily sheath. As he brought the edge to Korath’s skin, the ink caught the setting sunlight, a shimmering, dark promise of the cord he was about to weave into his son’s flesh.


The first cut came cleanly. Not straight, but in a gentle curve along the inner forearm—like water finding its path. The blade moved again, extending the line, steady and deliberate. Then it stopped. A break with the line ending. Tharuun paused, then the blade resumed. The line continued past the break, altered but not abandoned—carrying forward in its course. At the wrist, the pattern changed. 


There, Tharuun set a small geometric form into the skin—precise, sharp-edged, fixed where the flowing line met the joint, not decoration. A boundary. The ink followed the cuts, worked into the skin, pressed and held so it would take. 


It caught the fading light. Blue-green where it touched the edges and dark where it settled within.


Korath did not move. The sting came sharp, then settled into something deeper. He held himself steady—not resisting, not bracing—simply present in the work being done. The blade moved with purpose, each line placed. Each mark earned.


At last, Tharuun’s hands stilled. He set the blade aside and pressed a cloth briefly to the marks, sealing what had been done. Then he withdrew. He did not speak.


Granu rose as Korath lowered his arm slowly, the skin already warm, alive with the work. Granu stepped forward, studying the mark. He did not touch it, only looked to Korath. “This is not a mark of knowledge,” he said. “It is a mark of restraint.” He paused. “Of the moment you learned to stop.”


His gaze held. “Carry it as such.”


Korath inclined his head. “I will.”


Granu stepped back. “Then it is done.”


The gathering broke without ceremony. Soru rose, then Makaru. Kavaro lingered a moment, offering Korath a brief nod before turning away. Tharuun remained where he was. 


Korath gathered his tools and did not rush. When he was finished, he rose. Only then did he look at his father.

 

Tharuun met his gaze. No words passed between them. Korath turned and began the walk back toward the oasis. The light had faded while the air cooled. His arm ached—not sharply, but steadily. He didn’t try to ignore it, he let it remain—a reminder.

There was still more to learn.


Episode 6—A Celebration, then Work


The walk back from the cave’s entrance was not quiet.


Word had spread through the township, and by the time Korath reached the edge of the oasis, the fires were already higher than the evening required. The smell of food reached him before the voices did. Someone had slaughtered a lamb. Tables lined the walkways, some laden with breads, others with cheeses and still others with cured meats, pickled vegetables and brined olives. Nearest the oasis, tables groaned under the weight of desserts—custards and almond cakes along with lemon poppy seed loaves, fried dough glazed with honey and cinnamon. Someone else had brought out the good date wine that was held in reserve for markings and at funerals. For the people of the oasis the distinction between the two occasions was less than outsiders supposed—both events deserved witness.


Kavaro found him first, falling into step beside him without preamble.


“The ink held well,” he said. “The color is good.”


It was, Korath knew, the highest form of congratulations a man on the Elder’s bench would offer. He accepted it as such.


Others followed. Some loud, some quiet. A hand on the shoulder, a cup pressed into his grip. Drevna’s mother pulled him briefly into an embrace that smelled of woodsmoke and cumin and released him before he could respond. The young hunter himself, whose first mark had preceded Korath’s by a season, offered a grin and a clap to the back. 


Korath ate and ate well. He drank moderately. He let the evening move around him without trying to hold it. Later, when the fires had settled and the clan had folded itself into the quieter comfort of the night, he returned to the house. 


The common den was dark. The worktable stood where it had that morning. Korath crossed to it and set his satchel down. Then he stopped. The table was not as he had left it. 


The materials had been moved—not much, not dramatically, but enough. His drying cloths had been shifted to the left end, freeing the center. The small brazier had been repositioned, given more space. The row of small clay vials along the back had been adjusted, leaving a gap where none had been before. Space. Korath understood after a moment. For the ink vessel, once it was cleaned and returned.

 

His working space had expanded. No note, no instruction. No acknowledgement that anything had been done at all. Korath stood at the table for a long moment. His arm ached steadily. In the kitchen, the hearth fire had been banked, not extinguished—his father’s habit. The last thing done before sleep. He heard nothing from the back quarters. He did not call out.


He set the clay vessel, cleaned and resealed, in the space that had been made for it. It fit. He pulled a stool to the table, sat, and opened the nearest book to the page where he had left off. And now, for the first time, the table had room enough for what came next.

From Chapter One of Heirs of a Broken Circle

Scene 1.2

  

The common room of the Wayfarer’s Rest was never truly empty, but at this hour it held only the smells of last night’s fire and this morning’s bread. 


Lowen sat in a comfortable chair near the hearth, his feet swinging beneath him, hands wrapped around a mug of bitter chicory, while Briala settled at his feet. The large marsh hound had earned some rest as well, Lowen reckoned. The night’s ride had been hard on all of them. The pack on the table beside him carried sealed letters—not many, but each one weighted with the same warning he’d been spreading south-to-north along his trading route. Rook’s Rest was his next to last stop, but the hill dwarves to the north could wait a bit longer, as they were better prepared for what might come.


Yannos’ niece, Mara Vogar, moved between the tables with practiced quiet, setting fresh-baked bread and butter near the hearth next to Lowen—bread that she and her mother had made that morning. With a quiet nod in his direction, she headed back toward the kitchen to check on the morning tea. Lowen thoughtfully took up the small loaf and spread butter across the bread.


Encroachment. Organized. Moving with purpose. This time, from the northwest, an oddity to be sure.


He popped a bite of bread and butter to his mouth, his eyes widening upon the taste—warm sweet bread with fresh salted butter melting on his tongue. “By the Spirits, that girl can bake,” he said to himself. Briala glanced up from her resting spot, hoping a wayward crumb, or more might fall her way. 


The first to arrive was Garrik Veller, still wearing his night captain’s face—alert, assessing, not yet softened by morning routine. He surveyed the room in a glance, registered Lowen’s exhaustion, and pulled out a chair without preamble.


“You look half-dead, Reedwhistle.”


“Rode through the night.” Lowen leaned back into the deep cushions of the chair.


“That’s not your way.” Veller’s fingers drummed lightly against the dark wood of the table; three fingers in quick succession, his fourth resting against the grain, an old sentry check. “What’s moving out there?”


Before Lowen could answer, the door opened again. Yannos Vogar entered with the easy warmth of a man at home in his own hall. He’d lost his wife, Ellie, to illness years ago, and since then he and his extended family had kept the Wayfarer’s Rest running—longer than most folk of the settlement could recall. He carried three bowls of porridge—one for himself, one for Lowen, and one he set pointedly in front of Captain Veller, tossing a nod of familiarity his way. 


Yannos set his ponderous frame down across from Lowen, taking up spoon to porridge. He paused, spoon halfway to his mouth, and grinned at Veller. “Feed him before you interrogate him, Lieutenant. The man’s been on the road.” The old title landed on the Captain like a thumb on a bruise, another reminder they’d both been younger once. 


“I’m not interrogating, I’m—”


“Your posture says otherwise.” Yannos quietly set his spoon back to the bowl, then settled back into his chair, grey beard still sleep-mussed. “Now, Lowen. What brings you back early and looking like you’ve been chased?”


The door opened again and again in quick succession: Master Durnic, moving with that lean economy that never wasted motion, and the Deacon, Orrin Brekmar, who touched his pendant once before taking his seat. Rennic Harrowe arrived next, ink-stained fingers already reaching for his counting pouch, followed by Alysse Sallow smelling faintly of smoke-herbs and morning salves. Last came Elda Fenmark, who took one look at the gathering and shut the door firmly behind her.


“This is everyone?” Lowen asked. He looked around the table, all Common Men—men and women—save himself.


“Everyone who matters for news from the northwest.” Veller’s tone carried weight. “Now, talk to us, what brings you in such haste and rousing us all near the crack of dawn?”


Lowen set his mug down, looking from face to face. “I met a trader coming south toward Saltfen,” he said. “Half his wagon burned.”


Faces stilled, all listening intently.


“He called them a patrol,” Lowen went on. “Not cutpurses. Not road bandits. Uniformed.They asked for tribute like it was the law.”


Elda snorted. “Uniformed?” She looked about the table. “Apparently, now bandits love costumes.”


Silence took the room.


Lowen looked at her evenly and slid Ironglen’s letter onto the darkened wood of the tabletop. 

“Bandits scatter. These didn’t.”


Elda held Lowen’s gaze. “Say it plain, Master Halfling.”


Veller didn’t look at her. “He did. Now give us the rest.”


Lowen tapped the seal on the letter. “Two of their scouts sent north didn’t return. When they sent a larger party, they found tracks—boot prints, campfires, formations.” He glanced around the table. “Elda’s right that bandits work those roads. But bandits and brigands are disorganized. These forces are staying together. Moving with discipline.”


Master Durnic leaned forward, his forge-scarred hands flat on the table. “How many?”


“Ironglen’s scouts estimated two dozen, maybe more. But they’re not alone. I’ve got three more reports like this.” He laid the remaining letters on the table. “All from hamlets and hearths northwest of here. All describing the same thing: organized groups, military bearing, moving south and east.”


“Toward the elven lands,” the Deacon said quietly.


“Toward Derwen Elyll,” Lowen confirmed. “And after that, toward you all.”


Mara had entered the room. Approaching the hearth, she took up the poker in hand, adjusting logs to better warm the room. Her gaze flicked toward the door, then back to the table. With a slight nod to no one in particular, perhaps just to herself, she headed back toward the kitchen.


Ever the steward, Rennic Harrowe’s chalk tapped twice against the table. “How much time?”


“Unknown. Could be weeks. Could be longer.”


“Then it’s the elves’ problem.” Elda’s bluntness cut through the gathering tension. “Let them deal with it. We’ve got our own concerns—we barely made it through winter; the fields need planting now and with thin work crews to boot. The season’s already upon us. The farms can’t spare hands for someone else’s fight.”


Mara returned with a pot of tea, steaming, filling the room with warmth and the scent of chicory as she passed, moving quietly around the table and topping off mugs without interrupting. Her hand paused over Lowen’s cup, and she caught his eye briefly—concern there, unspoken.


“The elves fall; these forces keep moving south and east.” Veller’s voice was level. “We’re next in line.”


“If they fall,” Elda countered. “The elves have been in those woods longer than we’ve been building walls. They know their ground.”


“And if the elves don’t fall?” Alysse’s quiet voice drew attention—the same steady calm she brought to birthing rooms and sickbeds. “If they hold, and these forces turn east instead? We’re still too close to their path.”


“Speculation.” Elda shook her head. “We can’t strip our own defenses for a threat that might not come.”


“Forewarned is forearmed.” Yannos spoke mildly, but his eyes were sharp. “We don’t need to strip anything. We need to know.”


Master Durnic’s forge-scarred fingers drummed once. Quietly, nearing a whisper, he said, “Send scouts.”


Veller nodded. “Old Thorn’s right. Agreed.” He looked around the table, catching Yannos’ sly grin at the mention of Old Thorn. Master Durnic grimaced faintly at the old familiarity. Veller continued, “We send two scouts. Tavin takes the north route toward the foothills and ridges. Tessa goes west along the trade roads. Standard patrol range, nothing that risks them. We confirm or deny the pattern. Then we decide.”


“And if they confirm?” Elda asked.


“Then we send someone northwest.” Veller’s gaze settled on Lowen. “Someone who can read what the elves won’t say aloud and can come back alive.”


Lowen nodded slowly. He’d known that was coming. “I know what you’re askin’, Veller, and I don’t disagree, but with Wick laid up, and my short legs, I’m not the man for it. What I can do, though, is lend Whisper and Briala here to assist your choice of scout.” At the mention of her name, Briala lifted her head, ears cocking toward Lowen. He scratched behind her ears, letting her steal the last bite of buttered bread. 


Deacon Brekmar touched his pendant again. “The council agrees?”


Around the table, heads nodded—some reluctant, some resigned, but none dissenting.


“Two weeks,” Veller said. “Tavin and Tessa out and back. Then we reconvene and decide the next step, and who to send to scout.” 

The Wayfarer's Rest Common Room

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Chapter One A Chosen Life

Scene 1.1

Night still held the valley when Lowen Reedwhistle sighted Rook’s Rest—palisade and sharpened stakes etched black against the ridgeline, where the world became kept, not wild. On either side, farms began to emerge into the grey world, a rough ring around the settlement. 


Wick plodded on with the resignation of an ox asked for too much, too long. The wagon creaked in small complaints, every joint and strap speaking up in the pre-dawn hours, the stars beginning to thin overhead.


Ahead, the bridge spanned the dark water—a narrow, wooden spine connecting the forest path to the road beyond. Wick balked at the edge, but Lowen urged him forward. The boards answered with a soft, hollow drum under hoof and wheel, and Briala’s head came up at once—ears forward, nose tasting the wind. Overhead, Whisper swept toward the sleeping settlement in near silence.


Lowen kept his eyes on the gate and his hands steady on the reins. He could apologize to Wick later. He could sleep later. The news from the northwest wouldn’t wait.


Rook’s Rest stood dark against the breaking dawn as he drew back on the reins, boots braced on the wagon board to give his shorter frame leverage. The creak of the harness leather carried through the chill morning air, drawing the night guard’s attention. Seeing Lowen, the guard signaled for the gate. Wick slowed with a tired lowing, his breath steaming as the wagon rolled to a stop. Worry pricked at Lowen; he’d driven the ox through the night, something he would normally avoid. But he needed the settlement elders awake now, before the sun cleared the palisade.


Briala leapt from the wagon bed before it fully stopped, nose working the early morning air. She circled once, then pressed against Lowen’s leg as he climbed down. Whisper, having flown ahead of the slow ox and slower wagon, perched atop the gatepost, still as a carving, her pale form a ghost in the half-light. 


Lowen sighed softly as he gathered a small step ladder from under the wagon, setting it alongside Wick. Up close, he slid a hand along the ox’s shoulder. Heat met his palm before his eyes found the wound—the yoke had slipped in the night, rubbing the hide raw. The gall was walnut-sized, swollen and angry. 


His jaw tightened. He’d driven the old beast too hard, and the road had collected its due. He clambered back down and returned the ladder to its nook under the wagon.


“Merchant Reedwhistle.” The guard’s voice carried down from the wall, wry amusement in it. “Up early for a halfling.” He squinted into the pale dawn sky. “We weren’t expecting you for another fortnight.”


“News couldn’t wait, Torrin.” Lowen secured Wick’s lead to the post, frowning. The ox deserved rest and grain—he’d earned both. And the sore on his neck would need salve and time to heal. 


“I need the council roused. All of them. And send the ostler from the Wayfarer’s to see to old Wick here. He’ll need salve for this.”


The guard’s expression shifted. Men didn’t ride hard through the night for good tidings. “I’ll send word to the square. Captain Veller will want to know you’re here.”


“Tell him I’ll be at the Wayfarer’s Rest within the hour. And Torrin—make sure Yannos gets word too. And Master Durnic as well. This concerns the whole council and advisors.”

Note

This scene holds one of the my wife's favorite passages, as Lowen gathers the small step ladder from under the wagon. The image above is AI derived from the passage itself serving as the prompt. 

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